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pancha village between 2005 and 2015.

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The map illustrates the developments, which took place in Pancha village between 2005 and 2015. Overall, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from rural to modern area. By 2015, the village had a new road, educational areas, and people using modern utilities such as satellites and telephone poles. In 2015, the dirt road had been transformed into a two-lane highway with road signs. The map also demonstrates that the village has telephones poles and satellites which are located beside the road and bottom left corner of the map, respectively. Upper right corner, the school experienced a major transformation; the village had built a secondary school besides the primary school; however, the boundary of the school remains the same. Just below the schools, two houses had been demolished. On the left side of the road, below the houses, the market experienced no significant change. Above the market, it is apparent that the houses become larger and more houses have satellites instead of antennas, although some of them still use antennas.
The
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illustrates the developments, which took place in
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Pancha
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village
between 2005 and 2015.

Overall
, a comparison of the two
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maps
reveals a complete transformation from rural to modern area. By 2015, the
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village
had a new
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road
, educational areas, and
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people
using modern utilities such as satellites and telephone poles.

In 2015, the dirt
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road
had
been transformed
into a two-lane highway with
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road
signs. The
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map
also
demonstrates that the
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village
has telephones poles and satellites which
are located
beside the
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road
and bottom
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left
corner of the
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map
,
respectively
. Upper right corner, the
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school
experienced a major transformation; the
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village
had built a secondary
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school
besides
the primary
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school
;
however
, the boundary of the
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school
remains the same.
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Just
below the
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schools
, two
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houses
had
been demolished
.

On the
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left
side of the
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road
, below the
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houses
, the market experienced no significant
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change
. Above the market, it is apparent that the
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houses
become larger and more
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houses
have satellites
instead
of antennas, although
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some
of them
still
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use
antennas.
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IELTS academic pancha village between 2005 and 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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