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the graph shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to new Zealand from 1997 to 2007

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The graph compares daily spending trend of people who visited NZ between 1997 and 2017. Overall, all three categories showed fluctuation trend. And it is still interesting to know that while people who visited for business purpose seemed to decrease their spending, expenditure of trevellers for vacation or visiting friends or relatives showed increasing trend during this period. From 1997 to around 2005, visitors for business spent the highest level($260 to $340) but the end of 2005 the figure fell dramatically to $180 and continued to fluctuate untill 2017. In the case of spending trend of holiday travellers or visitors to friends, it indicated relatively level in the beginning of this survey, $200, $120 respectively. However it went up sharply to $270, $220 in 2003. While expenditure trend of holiday visitors remained same level till 2017, those of family visitors decreased continuously to $140 at the end of survey.

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