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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Wr0q
The bar chart in figure proposes data on the share of world population and respective concentration of global wealth for 8 different geographical regions. Firstly, China, India and Other Asian-Pacific countries account for more than 50% of world population and roughly 6% of total wealth. In particular, China registers the highest share of population, which is close to 22. 5% and a wealth share of 2. 5%. Similarly, other Asia-Pacific states present the second highest share of world population and a concentration of wealth at levels similar to China (17% of population and 2. 5 – 3% of wealth. On the other hand, North America places itself at the completely opposite side of the spectrum. It shares a mere 6% of world population, the lowest in the sample and displays the highest concentration of global wealth which is shy of 35%. It should be also noticed how Europe and India have the same shares of population (15% for each one) but the former holds the second largest portion of economic resources, at 30%, while the latter touches the lowest level at 1%. Overall, there seems to be a significant gap, with the poorest regions being also the ones with the largest populations.
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, the lowest in the sample and displays the highest concentration of global
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wealth
which is shy of 35%.

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