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The line chart illustrates the average daily expenditures of three different categories of oversea tourists to New Zealand during two decades.

The line chart illustrates the average daily expenditures of three different categories of oversea tourists to New Zealand during two decades. JmpE

The line chart illustrates the average daily expenditures of three different categories of oversea tourists to New Zealand during two decades. Overall, international tourists go to New Zealand and spend lesser than before, including the cost of business, vacation and visiting friends. In statistics given in 2000, it can be seen that business was the most common way in New Zealand that tourists cost over $324 at one day. Holiday and vacation ranked second at the same year, costing $224 daily, while visiting friends or relatives spent daily $182 dollars in New Zealand. The expenditures of three categories had been showing a fluctuation trend; especially the costs business had a significant decline between 2000 and 2010. Looking more closely in 2010, compared to those two categories, it is clear that the cost of people spending during holiday ranked top one, while the daily spending of foreign visitors who operating business and visiting friends or relatives in New Zealand in 2010 dropped to $170 and $138 respectively.

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