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Consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers

Consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers M76o

The line graph compares Australian teenagers' fast food consumption in terms of the amount and number of times of Pizza, Hamburgers, Fish and Chips over the period 1975 to 2000. It is clear that the consumption of Pizza and Hambergurs rose dramatically while the amount of consuming Fish and Chips went down significantly over the period 25years. From 1975 to 1995 the number of times eaten Pizza increased markedly from 5times to 85 times whereas the Australian teenagers peaked the eating Hamburgers from 10times to 100times. At the same time the figure for Fish and Chips fluctuated around 100 and 80 times by the year 1985 and suddenly decreased to 45times. By 2000, the number of eating times for Pizza and Hamburgers remained relatively unchanged. As the result the figures for Fish and Chips fell rapidly to 40times per year.

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 of Pizza, Hamburgers, Fish and Chips over the period 1975 to 2000.

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40times
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