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The graph below show the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

The graph below show the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. o7gq
The bar chart demonstrates three methods of disposal of waste materials in 2005, 2006, and 2008. In total, landfill method used most for waste of materials in 2005, while dumping in sea used maximum in 2008. It can be seen that landfill method continuously lost popularity, but dumping in sea gained response constantly. The least waste was burnt in all three years, and this method fluctuated during the whole period. In 2005, the landfill method used for waste of materials about 2000 million tonnes. Then, it continuously decreased during the given epoch and, in 2008, 1200 million tonnes were used by landfill to waste materials. In reverse, dumping in sea has shown an increase during the period. In 2005, 1200 million tonnes were used in waste disposal, about 1450 million tonnes and around 1650 million tonnes were use in waste disposal. The burning method has fluctuated throughout the period. In 2005, 900 million tonnes were used in waste settlement. The following year, it climbed and used 1200 million tonnes, but in the final year of the figure, it dropped to 900 million tonnes.
The bar chart demonstrates three
methods
of disposal of
waste
materials
in 2005, 2006, and 2008. In total,
landfill
method
used
most for
waste
of
materials
in 2005, while dumping in sea
used
maximum in 2008. It can be
seen
that
landfill
method
continuously
lost popularity,
but
dumping in sea gained response
constantly
. The least
waste
was burnt
in all three years, and this
method
fluctuated during the whole period. In 2005, the
landfill
method
used
for
waste
of
materials
about 2000
million
tonnes. Then, it
continuously
decreased during the
given
epoch and, in 2008, 1200
million
tonnes were
used
by
landfill
to
waste
materials
. In reverse, dumping in sea has shown an increase during the period. In 2005, 1200
million
tonnes were
used
in
waste
disposal, about 1450
million
tonnes and around 1650
million
tonnes were
use
in
waste
disposal. The burning
method
has fluctuated throughout the period. In 2005, 900
million
tonnes were
used
in
waste
settlement. The following year, it climbed and
used
1200
million
tonnes,
but
in the final year of the figure, it dropped to 900
million
tonnes.
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IELTS academic The graph below show the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

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