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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? Writing task 1 3o35
The table provides information on the statistics of social and economic indicators ( Annual income, Life Expectancy, Daily calorie intake, Adult literacy) in four countries in the year 1994 according to the United Nations. Overall, it appears the population of Canada and Japan experienced a better quality of life while Peru and Zaire had a poor standard of living. In Canada, the yearly income of an individual was US$11, 100, while the average life span was 76 years with the number of calories intake was 3326. Interestingly, both Canada and Japan has 99 per cent literacy rate of grown-ups for the year. The latter had the highest level of annual earnings per capita of US$15760. On the other hand, Peru and Zaire were relatively under poverty with the annual revenue of an individual in those nations being US$160 and US$130 respectively. For that reason, the amount of calories consumed by people on an average was 1927 kcal in Peru and 1749 kcal in Zaire. Despite surviving in poverty, Peru still had an above-average rate of literacy of 68 per cent.
The table provides information on the statistics of social and economic indicators
(
Annual income, Life Expectancy, Daily calorie intake, Adult literacy) in four countries in the year 1994 according to the United Nations.

Overall
, it appears the population of Canada and Japan experienced a better quality of life while Peru and Zaire had a poor standard of living.

In Canada, the yearly income of an individual was US$11, 100, while the average life span was 76 years with the number of calories intake was 3326.
Interestingly
, both Canada and Japan has 99 per cent literacy rate of grown-ups for the year. The latter had the highest level of annual earnings per capita of US$15760.

On the other hand
, Peru and Zaire were
relatively
under poverty with the annual revenue of an individual in those nations being US$160 and US$130
respectively
. For that reason, the amount of calories consumed by
people
on an average was 1927 kcal in Peru and 1749 kcal in Zaire. Despite surviving in poverty, Peru
still
had an above-average rate of literacy of 68 per cent.
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IELTS academic The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? Writing task 1

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4 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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