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The graph shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over 15 years. Waste in tonnes.

The graph shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over 15 years. Waste in tonnes. oEo3b
The Line graph depicts the number of waste manufactured in tonnes by three companies(A, B and C) for 15 years. Overall, while company A and B had the highest tonnes of waste produced at the beginning of the period, later fell after fifteen years, whereas the remaining company which had the lowest number of waste put together became the most popular production company over the same period. To begin, the waste produced by company A stood at 12 tonnes which were the highest at that year, despite having a decrease to 8 tonnes in 2015. While Company B which comprises of 8 tonnes build, later reach a peak at approximately 11 and fell sharply to 3 tonnes in 2015. The waste make up by company C in 2000 accounted for 4 tonnes which were the lowest production company at that year, however, having a sharp rise to about 11 tonnes became the most popular production company at that year.
The Line graph depicts the number of
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manufactured in tonnes by three
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companies
(A, B and C) for 15 years.

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, while
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company
A and B had the highest tonnes of
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waste
produced at the beginning of the period, later fell after fifteen years, whereas the remaining
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company
which had the lowest number of
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waste
put together became the most popular production
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company
over the same period.

To
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begin
, the
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produced by
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company
A stood at 12 tonnes which were the highest at that
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year
, despite having a decrease to 8 tonnes in 2015. While
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Company
B which
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comprises of
8 tonnes build, later reach a peak at approximately 11 and fell
sharply
to 3 tonnes in 2015.

The
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waste
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make
up by
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company
C in 2000 accounted for 4 tonnes which were the lowest production
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company
at that
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year
,
however
, having a sharp rise to about 11 tonnes became the most popular production
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IELTS academic The graph shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over 15 years. Waste in tonnes.

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