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The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future.

The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future. 53xQP
The map provides the information about how an office building is going to change in the future. Overall, it is clear to see that grass are eliminated and incorporated into the indoor facilities of the office building. Another fundamental change is that some rooms will no longer exist to make more space for the office room. According to the plan, the glass on the right side of the building will be converted into a newly extend area. It will include a coffee machine and a meeting area with chairs. The toilet, which is next to the storeroom now, is planned to move to the right corner of the building. Besides, the grass area on the left side will be replaced by an outdoor seating area to serve customers better. Other changes are intended to happen at the front of the building. Currently, the main entrance is located on the right side, but it will be relocated to the center. Four small offices near the entrance will be converted into two larger offices, one on either side of the entrance. Finally, the kitchen and canteen will be replaced by two more offices, while the storeroom is considered to remain intact.
The map provides the information about how an
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office
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building
is going to
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change
in the future.

Overall
, it is
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clear
to
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see
that grass
are eliminated
and incorporated into the indoor facilities of the
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office
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building
. Another fundamental
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change
is that
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some
rooms will no longer exist to
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make
more space for the
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office
room.

According to the plan, the glass on the right side of the
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building
will
be converted
into a
newly
extend
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area
. It will include a coffee machine and a meeting
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area
with chairs. The toilet, which is
next
to the storeroom
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now
,
is planned
to
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move
to the right corner of the
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building
.
Besides
, the grass
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area
on the
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left
side will
be replaced
by an outdoor seating
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area
to serve customers better.

Other
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changes
are intended
to happen at the front of the
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building
.
Currently
, the main entrance
is located
on the right side,
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but
it will
be relocated
to the center. Four
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small
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offices
near the entrance will
be converted
into two larger
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offices
, one on either side of the entrance.
Finally
, the kitchen and canteen will
be replaced
by two more
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offices
, while the storeroom
is considered
to remain intact.
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