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The graph shows the amount of oil production capacity in millions of barrels per day for several Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010.

The graph shows the amount of oil production capacity in millions of barrels per day for several Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010. PM22p
The graph shows the amount of oil production capacity in millions of barrels per day for several Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010. Overall, It is immediately apparent that, despite fluctuating a lot throught the gvien period. To Regard the productions of Kuwait and Iraq, reaching to double between 1990 and 2010. Kuwait's output increase gradually from 1. 8 million barrels per day in 1990 to 3. 8 million in 2010, whereas Iran rise slightly by smaller amount. After remaining static at 2. 5 million bpd from 1990 to 2000, the UAE's output expecting to reach 4. 0 million bpd in 2010. There is only a fall in Qatar's production, back to 0. 8 million bpd after a mild rise in 2002. Over the following four years, there is an increase from Saudi Arabia. In 1900, its output expanse at 8. 5 million bpd and then rise dramatically to over 14 million bpd in 2010. It is clear that most of the countries are expected to show increases and Saudi Arabia will remain as the strength producer.
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of barrels per day for several Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010.

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To Regard the productions of Kuwait and Iraq, reaching to double between 1990 and 2010. Kuwait's output increase
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barrels per day in 1990 to 3. 8
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in 2010, whereas Iran rise
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by smaller amount. After remaining static at 2. 5
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from 1990 to 2000, the UAE's output expecting to reach 4. 0
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in 2010. There is
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a fall in Qatar's production, back to 0. 8
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after a mild rise in 2002.

Over the following four years, there is an increase from Saudi Arabia. In 1900, its output expanse at 8. 5
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bpd
and then rise
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in 2010. It is
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that most of the countries are
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increases and Saudi Arabia will remain as the strength producer.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the amount of oil production capacity in millions of barrels per day for several Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010.

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