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The graph illustrates the estimated oil produced by several gulf countries (Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Qatar, Saudi Arabia and UAE) between the years 1990 and 2010.

The graph illustrates the estimated oil produced by several gulf countries (Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Qatar, Saudi Arabia and UAE) between the years 1990 and 2010. 26ddJ
The graph illustrates the estimated oil produced by several gulf countries (Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Qatar, Saudi Arabia and UAE) between the years 1990 and 2010, and it is measured in millions of barrels per day. Overall, it can be said that the oil production capacity increased in all six countries over the 20-year period of time and only Qatar showed slight difference. From the graph, we can obviously notice that Saudi Arabia surpassed all other countries with the highest rate in all 20 years, starting at about 8. 2 and significantly reaching at the peak of over 15 millions of barrels per day by 2010. Meanwhile, the other three countries- Iran, Iraq and Kuwait - showed nearly the same gradual rise in the years, which is around 1. 5 in total by the end of 2010. UAE, however, remained static at about 2. 2 from 1990 to 2000, and then witnessed a steady increase for the next ten years, rising up to nearly 4 in 2010. Qatar is the only country which showed mild fluctuations in the trend and possessed the lowest rate of below 1 throughout the years, only reaching its maximum point of 0. 8 in 2000, and then falling to around 0. 5 by 2010 which is nearly the same as its starting point in 1990.
The graph illustrates the estimated oil produced by several gulf
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countries
(Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Qatar, Saudi Arabia and UAE) between the years 1990 and 2010, and it
is measured
in millions of barrels per day.

Overall
, it can
be said
that the oil production capacity increased in all six
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countries
over the
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20-year
period of time and
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only
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showed
slight difference.

From the graph, we can
obviously
notice that Saudi Arabia surpassed all other
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countries
with the highest rate in all 20 years, starting at about 8. 2 and
significantly
reaching at the peak of over
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15 millions of
barrels per day by 2010. Meanwhile, the other three
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countries-
Iran, Iraq and Kuwait
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showed
nearly
the same gradual rise in the years, which is around 1. 5 in total by the
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end
of 2010.

UAE,
however
, remained static at about 2. 2 from 1990 to 2000, and then witnessed a steady increase for the
next
ten years, rising up to
nearly
4 in 2010. Qatar is the
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only
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country
which
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showed
mild fluctuations in the trend and possessed the lowest rate of below 1 throughout the years,
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only
reaching its maximum point of 0. 8 in 2000, and then falling to around 0. 5 by 2010 which is
nearly
the same as its starting point in 1990.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the estimated oil produced by several gulf countries (Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Qatar, Saudi Arabia and UAE) between the years 1990 and 2010.

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