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The given diagram compares the population growth in India and China from 2000 and how they will change in 2050.

The given diagram compares the population growth in India and China from 2000 and how they will change in 2050. kbAAn
The given diagram compares the population growth in India and China from 2000 and how they will change in 2050. Numbers in this graph are known as billions. At first, people who lived in China were more than the population in India in 2000. The population in China was already 1. 25 billion while the population in India was only 1 billion. The population in both countries increased gradually between 2000 and the present. The population of China and India meet at the same point which is considered as 1. 45 billion in the chart in 2030. The population in China might fall slightly to 1. 4 billion in 2050. At the same time, the Indian population will probably rise and reach 1. 6 billion. Thus, over the 50 years period, the population growth in India will have an upward tendency and it will overtake the population in China in 2050. On the other hand, the population in China will level out in 2030 and then begin to fall till 2050.
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growth in India and China from 2000 and how they will
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change
in 2050. Numbers in this graph
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as
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billions
. At
first
,
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people
who
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lived
in China were more than the
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population
in India in 2000. The
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population
in China was already 1. 25
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billion
while the
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population
in India was
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only
1
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billion
. The
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population
in both countries increased
gradually
between 2000 and the present. The
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population
of China and India
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meet
at the same point which
is considered
as 1. 45
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billion
in the chart in 2030. The
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population
in China might fall
slightly
to 1. 4
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billion
in 2050. At the same time, the Indian
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population
will
probably
rise and reach 1. 6
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billion
.
Thus
, over the 50 years period, the
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population
growth in India will have an upward tendency and it will overtake the
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population
in China in 2050.
On the other hand
, the
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population
in China will level out in 2030 and then
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begin
to fall till 2050.
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IELTS academic The given diagram compares the population growth in India and China from 2000 and how they will change in 2050.

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