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the graph shows population figures of america and canada since 2000 and predicted growth in 2050.summarize the information with relevant features and comparisons

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The graph illustrates how the populations of America and Canada have changed since 2000 and how they will change in the future. Overall, America experienced an upward trend, while Canada witnessed a downward trend in the graph. However, both the countries experienced a fluctuation as initially America had lower population than Canada, but in the future America outraised Canada. In 2000, there were significant number of people living in Canada than America. The Canada's population was about 1. 25 billion, while America's population was only 1 billion. Between 2000 and 2010, there had been a 0. 2 rise in the number of american citizens. Over the same period, China's population has incremented by 0. 1 billion to reach over 1. 35 billion. Explicitly, the population in America will escalate dramatically than in Canada and experts says that by 2030, both nations have same population of 1. 45 billion. Following this, Canada's population is expected to decline marginally to 1. 45 billion in 2050, while America's population is expected to spike to 1. 6 billion.
The graph illustrates how the
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of America and Canada have
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changed
since 2000 and how they will
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change
in the future.

Overall
, America experienced an upward trend, while Canada witnessed a downward trend in the graph.
However
, both the countries experienced a fluctuation as
initially
America had lower
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population
than Canada,
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but
in the future America
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outraised
Canada.

In 2000, there were significant number of
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people
living in Canada than America. The Canada's
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population
was about 1. 25
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billion
, while America's
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population
was
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only
1
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billion
. Between 2000 and 2010, there had been a 0. 2
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rise
in the number of
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american
citizens. Over the same period, China's
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population
has incremented by 0. 1
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billion
to reach over 1. 35 billion.

Explicitly
, the
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population
in America will escalate
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dramatically
than in Canada and experts says that by 2030, both nations have same
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population
of 1. 45
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billion
. Following this, Canada's
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population
is
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expected
to decline
marginally
to 1. 45
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billion
in 2050, while America's
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population
is
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expected
to spike to 1. 6
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billion
.
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IELTS academic the graph shows population figures of america and canada since 2000 and predicted growth in 2050.

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