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the graph shows number of tourists visiting caribbean island during 2010 and 2017

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The graph displays the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 which are probably in millions by staying on cruise ships and staying on the island. The graph shows in the year 2010 there were 0. 3 million visitors who visited the island by cruise ships and 0. 7 million visitors visited the island by staying on the island which was around 1 million visitors for that year. In the year 2012 visitors were decreased to 0. 3 million who were staying on cruise ships. The number of visitors who were staying on the island rapidly increases from the year 2012 to 2015 with 1. 5 million visitors. However, which visitors staying on ships were increase in the year 2014 to 2017 year from 1 million visitors to 2 million visitors in those years. As per the graph number of the visitor's increases as they get knowledge of the island by different routes.
The graph displays the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean
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The graph
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2010 there were 0. 3
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