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The given bar chart illustrates the expenditure on three categories among various age group of residents in the UK in 2004. Overall, it is clear seen that the highest proportion of spending went on food and drinks in most age groups the 61 _ 75 age group, spent more on entertainment and less on restaurant and hotels. Moving to detail, under 30 age group was spent a more money on restaurant and hotel and other two was gone to similar trend nearly 6 percent. Then, 31 _ 45 years olds was significantly fall over the three items about 16, 9, 14 % respectively. The age up to 46 _ 60 was spent a more money on food snd drink approximately, 17 % and then the restaurant and hotel priority was normally decrease by onlyb11 percent. The same age group wad the entertainment source spent a expenditure was steady grown about 16 %. Probing further, the over 61 _ 75 age group was least prefer to restaurant and hotel. However, maximum money on spent a entertainment. Which was twenty two percent. After that under 76year old was spend a largest amount on money by food and Drink nearly 22. 5 %. Whilst, lowest spent on R estaurant and Hotels.
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bar chart illustrates the expenditure on three categories among various
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of residents in the UK in 2004.
Overall
, it is
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clear
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that the highest proportion of spending went on food and drinks in most
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groups
the 61 _ 75
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,
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more on entertainment and less on
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and
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. Moving to detail, under 30
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a more
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on
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and
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and other two
was gone
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6 percent. Then, 31 _ 45 years olds was
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over the three items about 16, 9, 14 %
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. The
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up to 46 _ 60 was
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drink approximately, 17 % and then the
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priority was
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by onlyb11 percent. The same
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wad the entertainment source
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expenditure was steady grown about 16 %. Probing
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was least prefer to
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entertainment. Which was
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22. 5 %. Whilst, lowest
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