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The given table delineates the number of oil barrels produced by four Africa regions between 2000 and 2004

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The given table delineates the number of oil barrels produced by four Africa regions between 2000 and 2004 Overall, it is clear that the level of productions in Nigeria, Chad and Somalia increased noticeablely, whereas a reserve pattern could be observed in Congo over the year shown In 2000, a major oil manufacturers were Congo and Nigeria at 275000 barrels and 205000 barrels, respectively. Nigeria's oil production decline slightly at about 190000 barrels from 2000 to 2002, followed by a sudden rose to 213000 barrels daily in 2004. By contrast, the oil amount provided in Congo plunged to just over 200000 barrels each day and there was a switch ranks between Nigeria and Congo in 2004. From 2000 to 2002, oil was not provided by Chad. Nevertheless, 8000 barrels of oil were produced by this nation in a day in 2003 and its number climbed roughly sixfold at about 50000 barrels in 2004. Although Somilia output jumped from 5000 to 50000 over five-year-period, it still a small-scale manufacturer compared to two others countries.
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produced by four Africa regions between 2000 and 2004

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, it is
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clear
that the level of productions in Nigeria, Chad and Somalia increased
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noticeablely
, whereas a reserve pattern could
be observed
in Congo over the year shown

In 2000, a major
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manufacturers were Congo and Nigeria at 275000
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and 205000
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,
respectively
. Nigeria's
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production decline
slightly
at about 190000
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barrels
from 2000 to 2002, followed by a sudden rose to 213000
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daily in 2004. By contrast, the
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amount provided in Congo plunged to
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over 200000
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barrels
each day and there was a switch ranks between Nigeria and Congo in 2004.

From 2000 to 2002,
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was not provided by Chad.
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, 8000
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barrels
of
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were produced
by this nation in a day in 2003 and its number climbed roughly sixfold at about 50000
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barrels
in 2004. Although
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Somilia
output jumped from 5000 to 50000 over five-year-period, it
still
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-scale manufacturer compared to two others countries.
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IELTS academic The given table delineates the number of oil barrels produced by four Africa regions between 2000 and 2004

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