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Bar chart India gross domestic

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The bar chart illustrates data on the percentages of three sectors contributing to India economy in terms of gross domestic product between 1960 and 2000. Overall, the proportion of services steadily increased in 40 years while there was a decline in this terms of agriculture. However, this figure for industry remained relatively stable over the period of time. In 1960, the percentages of argiculture was the highest, at around 61%. In contrast, the rates for industry and services was lower, with only approximately 17% and 18% respectively. Industry showed a slight increase in the next 2 years, went up to around 25% in 1980, where it remained the same in the rest period. From the highest point in 1960, the proportion of agriculture contributing to India’s gross domestic product fell to roughly 14% in the last year, accounted for the lowest percentage compared to the two sectors (Industry and Services). In other hand, services continued to rise significantly then peaked at over 60% in 2000.
The bar chart illustrates data on the percentages of three sectors contributing to India economy in terms of gross domestic product between 1960 and 2000.

Overall
, the proportion of
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services
steadily
increased in 40 years while there was a decline in
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terms of agriculture.
However
, this figure for
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industry
remained
relatively
stable over the period of time.

In 1960, the percentages of
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argiculture
was the highest, at around 61%.
In contrast
, the rates for
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industry
and
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services
was lower, with
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approximately 17% and 18%
respectively
.
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Industry
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showed
a slight increase in the
next
2 years, went up to around 25% in 1980, where it remained the same in the rest period.

From the highest point in 1960, the proportion of agriculture contributing to India’s gross domestic product fell to roughly 14% in the last year, accounted for the lowest percentage compared to the two sectors
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(Industry
and
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. In other hand,
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services
continued to rise
significantly
then peaked at over 60% in 2000.
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