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The graph shows information about the recruitment in Ontario between 2001 and 2007, in this chart we can see the percentage of first year English Language Teacher and French Language Teachers with regular teaching jobs by the year of graduation

The graph shows information about the recruitment in Ontario between 2001 and 2007, in this chart we can see the percentage of first year English Language Teacher and French Language Teachers with regular teaching jobs by the year of graduation R2bD8
The graph shows information about the recruitment in Ontario between 2001 and 2007, in this chart we can see the percentage of first year English Language Teacher and French Language Teachers with regular teaching jobs by the year of graduation. IN 2001 the percentage of both English and French Language teachers was close with 75 percent for the ELT and 70 percent for the FLT, the amount of hire new teachers in 2002 graduate year feel to 58 percent for the ELT and 52 percent for the FLT, in 2003 year of graduation the number of the ELT who was hired keep fell to 40 percent but on the same year recruitment of the FLT was grow to 68 percent. Between 2004 and 2007 the percentage of the FLT was slowly growth to 75 percent and the teachers who recruitment from 2004 to 2007 fluctuated and eventually drop to under 30 percent in 2007. In conclusion, in Ontario's schools between 2002 and 2007 French Language has been more popular and children have eager to learn French than English.
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and French
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with regular teaching jobs by the
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IN 2001 the percentage of both English and French
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was close with 75
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for the ELT and 70
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for the FLT, the amount of hire new
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in 2002 graduate
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feel to 58
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for the ELT and 52
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for the FLT, in 2003
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to 68 percent.

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in 2007.

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, in Ontario's schools between 2002 and 2007 French
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has been more popular and children have eager to learn French than English.
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