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Fox population on four islands in California

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The line graph shows the population of foxes on four different Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. The four islands are San Miguel, Santa Cruz, Santa Rosa, and Santa Catalina. Based on the line graph we can see that the highest population in 1994 were founded in Santa Rosa, and the lowest were founded in San Miguel. The difference is about 1300. In 1996, the fox population in the four islands decreased extremely. Santa Rosa island and San Miguel island based on the information in 2000, almost no foxes are found there, but thankfully in 2002 the foxes appeared and increased slowly. The graph of the other two islands was slightly the same trend, and they both never touched zero.
The line graph
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between 1994 and 2014. The four
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are San Miguel, Santa Cruz, Santa Rosa, and Santa Catalina.

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that the highest population in 1994
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in San Miguel. The difference is about 1300. In 1996, the
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population in the four
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decreased
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. Santa Rosa
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and San Miguel
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based on the information in 2000, almost no
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are found
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appeared and increased
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The graph of the other two
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was
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the same trend, and they both never touched zero.
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IELTS academic Fox population on four islands in California

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3 paragraphs
120 words
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