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The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000.

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The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000. Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km³ to around 3, 000 km³ in the year 2000. Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1, 000 km³, while domestic use rose more slowly to only 300 km³, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture. The table illustrates the differences in agriculture consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil (26, 500 km³) with that in the D. R. C. (100 km²). This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m³ compared with only 8 m³ in the Congo. With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agriculture water consumption can be in some countries.
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worldwide
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between 1900 and 2000.

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was
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for agricultural Purposes, and this increased
dramatically
from about 500 km³ to around 3, 000 km³ in the year 2000.
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used
in the industrial and domestic sectors
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consumption
was minimal until mid-century. From 1950 onwards, industrial
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grew
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over 1, 000 km³, while domestic
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rose more
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300 km³, both far below the levels of
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by agriculture.

The table illustrates the differences in agriculture
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in
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areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil (26, 500 km³) with that in the D. R. C. (100 km²). This means that a huge amount of
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is
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used
in agriculture in Brazil, and this
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in the figures for
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per person: 359 m³ compared with
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8 m³ in the Congo. With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agriculture
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can be in
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countries.

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