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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of meteorology collects up to the minute information on the weather to produce reliable forecasts.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of meteorology collects up to the minute information on the weather to produce reliable forecasts. b1r3
The process graph depicts the information of how up to the minute information on the weather produces reliable forecasts by the Australian Bureau of meteorology. It is vivid that, in the first step the satellite is design to receive incoming information as well as it further connects with satellite photos which is the useful analysis and forecasting the information. In the second step, radar is also connected to the radar screen. In the third step, the digital buoy is connected with the synoptic chart. It further transfers information through the computer to a recorded announcement. After that, the satellite photo and radar screen are effective to provide up-to-date information on tv newspapers and radio by computers. Overall, it is clearly seen that, the process carries three main steps of transfers information by the Australian Bureau. if one step is missing, all process is disturbed.
The process graph depicts the
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up to the minute
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on the weather produces reliable forecasts by the Australian Bureau of meteorology.

It is vivid that, in the
first
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step
the satellite is design to receive incoming
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information
as well
as it
further
connects with satellite photos which is the useful analysis and forecasting the
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information
. In the second
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step
, radar is
also
connected to the radar screen.

In the third
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step
, the digital buoy
is connected
with the synoptic chart. It
further
transfers
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information
through the computer to a recorded announcement. After that, the satellite photo and radar screen are effective to provide up-to-date
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information
on
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tv
newspapers and radio by computers.

Overall
, it is
clearly
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seen
that, the process carries three main
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steps
of transfers
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information
by the Australian Bureau.
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if
one
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step
is missing, all process
is disturbed
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of meteorology collects up to the minute information on the weather to produce reliable forecasts.

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