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the changes of Paradise Island from past yo present illustrated in this map

the changes of Paradise Island from past yo present illustrated in this map 71PY

The map reveals the honing of Paradise Island between past and now. Overall, numerous developments and adding have occurred as a result of renovation of the Paradise Island. Firstly, there was a beach on the north-west side of the Island which was located just above the Pier with a bridge and boats, however, over the year passed it has been changed considerably that we can see numerous adding such as permission for swimmers in the beach, then the bridge over the Pier was expanded, consequently that boats have turned into a splendid cruise ship now. In addition, the sea took place in the north in the past and scientific research station was the main architecture of west-south side including some trees around it, comparing with today's location it had destroyed and rebuilt as a hotel complex, accordingly swimming pool was constructed instead of that trees. While open restaurant is nearly in the middle of the Island, the BBQ area lies just under it followed by the cycle path in the south-east, one planting space coalesced there previously. In the empty north-east side filled by situating Scenic lookout now, however the rocks have been remaining mimic to the north-east. The natural spring has introduced as Café in the east.

The map reveals the honing of Paradise Island between past and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

Overall
, numerous developments and adding have occurred as a result
 of renovation of the Paradise Island.

Firstly
, there was a beach on the north-west side of the Island which was located
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above the Pier with a bridge and boats, however
, over the year passed it has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
considerably
 that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 numerous adding such as permission for swimmers in the beach, then the bridge over the Pier was expanded
, consequently
 that boats have turned into a splendid cruise ship This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. In addition
, the sea took place in the north in the past and scientific research station was the main architecture of west-south side including This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees around it, comparing with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's location it had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and rebuilt as a hotel complex, accordingly
 swimming pool was constructed
instead
 of that trees. While open restaurant is nearly
 in the middle of the Island, the BBQ area lies This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under it followed by the cycle path in the south-east, one planting space coalesced there previously. In the empty north-east side filled by situating Scenic lookout This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, however
 the rocks have been remaining mimic to the north-east. The natural spring has introduced as Café in the east. 