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information about the complaints received by environmental health departments which are made about noise in the city of Newtown in 16 years

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The given line chart depicts the information about the complaints received by environmental health departments which are made about noise in the city of Newtown in 16 years. At a fleeting glance, it is abundantly clear that in 1980 minimum reports were received by authorities was 400 which are made by household sector whereas maximum complaints were made about noise to department was about road works. But the figure of complaints about noise by road works was decreased at 100 in 1996. While the reports for domestic sector was increased by 400 in 1996. Moving further, environmental health departments received 500 complaints of traffic noise in 1980 and between 1986 and 1988 it becomes stable at 400 complaints but it jumped at 1200 complaints in 1996. Furthermore, the complaints about noise for factories till 1984 was 600 however it fixed at 700 in next years. Overall, it is lucid that there were many fluctuations in the number of complaints in Newtown city but traffic noise showed maximum reports in last year.
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to department was about road works.
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noise
by road works
was decreased
at 100 in 1996. While the reports for domestic sector
was increased
by 400 in 1996.

Moving
further
, environmental health departments received 500
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of traffic
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noise
in 1980 and between 1986 and 1988 it becomes stable at 400
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it jumped at 1200
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in 1996.
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, the
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about
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for factories till 1984 was 600
however
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at 700 in
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, it is lucid that there were
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in
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traffic
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maximum reports in last year.

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