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The graph shows four areas of accommodation status in a major European city from 1970 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows four areas of accommodation status in a major European city from 1970 to 2000. LG6Br
The line graph compares four areas of accommodation status in a major city in Europe between 1970 and 2000. In general, buying accommodation in other accommodation status markedly changed while the two remanning ones didn’t change as much as them. Also, tenants leveled the highest number during the period. From 1970 to 1980, the number of people buying houses significantly declined from about 55, 000 to 40, 000. In contrast, ternants, landlords and the other followed the same trend. Their figures all steadily went up in 1980 and reached nearly 50, 000, over 30 000 and 20000 respectively. The 20 years, ternants and landlords both gradually decreased to 1970’s figures whereas the number of ones bought houses and the others had the similar tendency of fluctuating over 1980-to-2000 period. Buying accommodation status hit the peak of about 14, 000 people in 1990 in contrast with the other status plunged to the trough of 15, 000 people approximately. In 2000, this two status stopped at 20000 in the same way.
The line graph compares four areas of
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accommodation
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status
in a major city in Europe between 1970 and 2000.

In general
, buying
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accommodation
in
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other
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accommodation
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status
markedly
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changed
while the two
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remanning
ones didn’t
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change
as much as them.
Also
, tenants leveled the highest number during the period.

From 1970 to 1980, the number of
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people
buying
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houses
significantly
declined from about 55, 000 to 40, 000.
In contrast
,
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ternants
, landlords and the
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other
followed the same trend. Their figures all
steadily
went up in 1980 and reached
nearly
50, 000, over 30 000 and 20000
respectively
.

The 20 years,
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ternants
and landlords both
gradually
decreased to
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1970’s
figures whereas the number of ones
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bought
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houses
and the others had the similar tendency of fluctuating over 1980-to-2000 period. Buying
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accommodation
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status
hit the peak of about 14, 000
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people
in 1990
in contrast
with the
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other
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status
plunged to the trough of 15, 000
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people
approximately. In 2000, this two
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status
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stopped
at 20000
in the same way
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows four areas of accommodation status in a major European city from 1970 to 2000.

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