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The table and pie charts show the values and sources of fish import to the U.S. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie charts show the values and sources of fish import to the U. S. XDaDY
The table enumerates the information about the expenditure of fish that were imported to America, while the pie charts illustrate the statistics about those nations who exported the fish to the United States in the three-year period. Additionally, units were measured in dollars as well as in percentage. Overall, it is conclusively obvious that the contribution of Canada was plunged gradually throughout the period, whereas the exportation from China was proliferated. In addition, the cost of imported fish was raised slightly. Primarily, it is conspicuous that the value of fish in 1988 was merely 6. 57 billion dollars. Moreover, the proportion of Canadian fish was exactly 60%, which was twofold than others nations, however, 13% from China in 1988. Further, there was an increment of $1. 95 billion in 1992, when the least contributor country was china, being 20 percent. Nevertheless, 34% and 46% of fish were imported from Canada and others countries respectively. Furthermore, the total value of fish in 2000 was 10. 72 billion dollars. Nonetheless, the figure for China was 30%, whilst it was higher than others countries. Eventually, there was a 1% difference between Canada and other nations, in the final year
The table enumerates the information about the expenditure of fish that
were imported
to America, while the pie charts illustrate the statistics about those nations who exported the fish to the United States in the three-year period.
Additionally
, units
were measured
in dollars
as well
as in percentage.

Overall
, it is
conclusively
obvious that the contribution of Canada
was plunged
gradually
throughout the period, whereas the exportation from China
was proliferated
.
In addition
, the cost of imported fish
was raised
slightly
.

Primarily
, it is conspicuous that the value of fish in 1988 was
merely
6. 57 billion dollars.
Moreover
, the proportion of Canadian fish was exactly 60%, which was
twofold
than others nations,
however
, 13% from China in 1988.
Further
, there was an increment of $1. 95 billion in 1992, when the least contributor country was
china
, being 20 percent.
Nevertheless
, 34% and 46% of fish
were imported
from Canada
and others
countries
respectively
.

Furthermore
, the total value of fish in 2000 was 10. 72 billion dollars. Nonetheless, the figure for China was 30%, whilst it was higher than others countries.
Eventually
, there was a 1% difference between Canada and
other
nations, in the final year
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IELTS academic The table and pie charts show the values and sources of fish import to the U. S.

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