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The diagram illustrated the production of clothes

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The diagram illustrated the production of clothes, using recycled plastic bottles as the input materials. Overall, plastic bottles undergo a 13-step process to become clothes. This whole process is categorized into 3 main stages of collecting, preparing, and processing stages, characterized with the conversion in the status of plastic bottles, from solid into liquid then into solid form again. At the collecting stages, plastic bottles are collected and transported to the factories using trucks. In the factories, bottles are then categorized to prepare for the next stages. The very next stage turns sorted bottles into input materials for manufacturing clothes, starting with plastic bottles being cut into small pieces and being washed to remove impurities. These small pieces are then dried about 10 hours before undergoing the boiling step, a process that converts plastic pieces into liquid. Plastic in the liquid form is then strained using industrial machinery to form yarns with different colors. The weaving machine then weaves these yarns into the sheets and roils them up, forming the bolts of plastic cloth used for manufacturing clothes from recycled plastic bottles.
The diagram illustrated the production of
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clothes
, using recycled
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plastic
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bottles
as the input materials.

Overall
,
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plastic
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bottles
undergo a 13-step process to become
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clothes
. This whole process
is categorized
into 3 main
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stages
of collecting, preparing, and processing
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stages
, characterized with the conversion in the status of
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plastic
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bottles
, from solid into liquid then into solid form again.

At the collecting
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stages
,
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plastic
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bottles
are collected
and transported to the factories using trucks. In the factories,
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bottles
are then categorized to prepare for the
next
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stages
. The
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very
next
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stage
turns sorted
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bottles
into input materials for manufacturing
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clothes
, starting with
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plastic
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bottles
being
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cut
into
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small
pieces and
being washed
to remove impurities. These
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small
pieces are then dried about 10 hours
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before
undergoing the boiling step, a process that converts
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plastic
pieces into liquid.

Plastic in the liquid form is then strained using industrial machinery to form yarns with
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different
colors. The weaving machine then weaves these yarns into the sheets and roils them up, forming the bolts of
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plastic
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cloth
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used
for manufacturing
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clothes
from recycled
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plastic
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bottles
.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrated the production of clothes

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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