Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The pie chart gives information about the country of birth

The pie chart gives information about the country of birth WEAEq
The pie chart illustrates the information about the country of bith of people living in Austrilia and the table shows the informqtion about where they lives. In pie chart, it is observed that, about 73% of people choose to live in Austrilia where they born. In addition, about 7% of British people like to live in Austrilia. Besides that, 3 % of people, who born in New Zealand tend to live in Austrilia. Moreover about 2% of chiness people and 1% of Netherland people tend to live in Austrilia. Apart from that 14% of other people live in Austrilia. On the other hand, it is observed in table that only one per cent pf chiness people like to live in rural areas and rest people live in cites in Austrilia. Which is quite different patterns emarged as compared to any other nations. Approximately 80% of people, who belongs to Austrilia and New Zealand lives in cities and rest people lives in rural areas. About 10% of Netherlands and UK people lives in rural areas and 90% of people live in cities. Overall, in the pie chart, it is observed that most of the people who born in Austrilia, likes to live in their own country. Whereas only small amount of Netherlands people lives in Austrilia. Moreover, most of the chiness people love to live in cities rather than rural areas.
The pie chart illustrates the information about the country of
Possible spelling mistake found.
bith
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
living in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
and the table
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
informqtion
about where they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "live"
lives
.

In pie chart, it
is observed
that, about 73% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
choose to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
where they born.
In addition
, about 7% of British
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
.
Besides
that, 3 % of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, who born in New Zealand tend to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
about 2% of
Possible spelling mistake found.
chiness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and 1% of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Netherland
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
tend to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
. Apart from that 14% of other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
.

On the other hand
, it
is observed
in table that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one per cent pf
Possible spelling mistake found.
chiness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
and rest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in cites in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
. Which is quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
patterns
Possible spelling mistake found.
emarged
as compared to any other nations. Approximately 80% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, who belongs to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
and New Zealand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lives
in cities and rest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
lives
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
. About 10%
A determiner is probably missing here: "of the Netherlands".
of Netherlands
and UK
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
lives
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
and 90% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in cities.

Overall
, in the pie chart, it
is observed
that most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who born in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
, likes to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
country.
“Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
amount of Netherlands
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
lives
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Austrilia
.
Moreover
, most of the
Possible spelling mistake found.
chiness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in cities
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The pie chart gives information about the country of birth

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts