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The given diagram shows the life cycle of salmon fish

The given diagram shows the life cycle of salmon fish 6lGa8

The life cycle illustrates various stages involved in the development of salmon fish. Initially, eggs are laid by an adult fish and the stage involved is known as incubation followed by the emergence of very small fishes who are reared in freshwater for small time period. After that it stays in estuaries where it grows and lives for short time and this rearing is called as estuary rearing. Later on, salmon fish living in estuaries, moves to rearing areas where they are reared in a effective manner. In its subsequent stage, it migrates to oceans where it underwent the stage of growing and become mature. In its corresponding stage, mature salmon fish moves to spawning areas through estuaries and here they lay eggs again and cycle continues. Overall, the life cycle of a salmon fish is incessant in nature and it undergoes number of transformations and migrations throughout its life.

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