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The pie chart gives the information about the country of birth in the Australia and the table shows the

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The pie illustrate about the country of birth people living in Australia and the table gives information about people born in these countries live. Firstly, the 73% of Australian people live in Australia. Secondly UK people live in Australia was 7%. Chinese was only 2% and Netherlands people was only 1%. The other countries people was 14% in Australia. In UK 89% people living in city and 11% in rural areas. Second was Australia 83% individuals live in urban areas. In china 99% are living metropolis only one percent people are living in suburbs. New Zealand's 88 % humans live in town and 20% of mankind live in countryside. Netherlands 90%  persons are live in  cities and only 10% individuals in rural areas. Overall, in Australia Australian people are the most in country. Most of the people in every country  like to inhabit in cities
The pie illustrate about the
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in Australia and the table gives information about
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born in these
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UK
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in Australia was 7%. Chinese was
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2% and Netherlands
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was
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1%. The other
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was 14% in Australia.

In UK 89%
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in city and 11% in rural areas. Second was Australia 83% individuals
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in urban areas. In
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99% are
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metropolis
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one percent
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are
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in suburbs. New Zealand's 88 % humans
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in town and 20% of mankind
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in countryside. Netherlands 90%
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persons are
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in
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cities and
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10% individuals in rural areas.

Overall
, in Australia Australian
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are the most in
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. Most of the
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in every country
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like to inhabit in
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cities
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IELTS academic The pie chart gives the information about the country of birth in the Australia and the table shows the

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144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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