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the graph shows average co2 emission per person

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The line chart illustrate amount of carbon dioxide was emitted per person in various countries named uk, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. It is noticeable that however production of co2 in uk had a downward trend over the period shown, it had highest rate among whole counties. regarding to graph data, in 1967 uk emitted about 11 tonnes of co2 production which decrease gradually and reached to lowest level in 2007. the figure for Sweden had a different pattern, it begin from 9 tonnes of co2 emission and rised to a peak at 10 tonnes by a decade. However, the co2 emission between 1987 and 2007 is similar to uk and experience a decline by around 4 tonnes co2. As far Italy and Portugal as concerned, both of them escalated sharply over the years mentioned. from 2 and 4 tonnes in 1967 to 7 and 5 tonnes for individual, respectively. It was clear that in 2007, the usegae of Italy and Portugal was same. Overall, majority of co2 was emitted by uk but Portugal was minimum among four countries over 4 decades.
The line chart illustrate amount of carbon dioxide
was emitted
per person in various countries named
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uk
, Sweden,
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ltaly
and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. It is noticeable that
however
production of co2 in
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uk
had a downward trend over the period shown, it had
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highest
rate among whole counties.

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regarding to
graph data, in 1967
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uk
emitted about 11 tonnes of co2 production which decrease
gradually
and reached to
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lowest
level in 2007.
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the
figure for Sweden had a
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different
pattern, it
Did you mean "begins"?
begin
from 9 tonnes of co2 emission and
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rised
to a peak at 10 tonnes by a decade.
However
, the co2 emission between 1987 and 2007 is similar to
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uk
and experience a decline by around 4 tonnes co2.

As far Italy and Portugal as concerned, both of them escalated
sharply
over the years mentioned.
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from 2 and 4
tonnes in 1967 to 7 and 5 tonnes for individual,
respectively
. It was
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clear
that in 2007, the
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usegae
of Italy and Portugal was same.

Overall
,
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majority of
co2
was emitted
by
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uk
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but
Portugal was minimum among four countries over 4 decades.
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