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the chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in a European country

the chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in a European country 8dQ8P
The bar chart compares the amount of waste disposed to three types of ways namely landfill, burning and dumping in sea in a nation in Europe between 2005 and 2008. Overall, it is clear that waste disposal to landfill decreased slightly, while there was a gradual increase in the figure for burning during the period shown. In 2005, 70 million tonnes of garbage went into landfill. Both burning and dumping in the sea were also popular methods. In the following years, this number then dropped steadily by around 10 million tonnes and was only 40 million tonnes in 2008. Likewise, the amount of trash discharged into the sea declined from 55 million tonnes to 40 million tonnes at the end of the period. The garbage disposal by incineration was slightly lower than that of landfill by around 5 million tonnes in 2005. Over the following four year, however, burning was the most used method to around 65 million tonnes. The air pollution was dramatically increasing.
The bar chart compares the amount of waste disposed to three types of ways
namely
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landfill
,
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burning
and dumping in sea in a nation in Europe between 2005 and 2008.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that waste disposal to
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landfill
decreased
slightly
, while there was a gradual increase in the figure for
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burning
during the period shown.

In 2005, 70
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million
tonnes of garbage went into
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landfill
. Both
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burning
and dumping in the sea were
also
popular methods. In the following years, this number then dropped
steadily
by around 10
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million
tonnes and was
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only
40
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million
tonnes in 2008.
Likewise
, the amount of trash discharged into the sea declined from 55
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million
tonnes to 40
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million
tonnes at the
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end
of the period.

The garbage disposal by incineration was
slightly
lower than that of
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landfill
by around 5
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million
tonnes in 2005. Over the following four year,
however
,
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burning
was the most
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used
method to around 65
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million
tonnes. The air pollution was
dramatically
increasing.
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