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The maps exhibit Southwest Airport in the present time and proposed changes next year after advancement.

The maps exhibit Southwest Airport in the present time and proposed changes next year after advancement. NlV72
The maps exhibit Southwest Airport in the present time and proposed changes next year after advancement. Overall, The principal change will be on the north side and entrance. There will be drastic changes in the airport such as new gates, cafe, ATM and car hire and some new facilities will also offer for both departing and arriving passengers. As it is seen that, the Southwest Airport is currently divided into three segments: departures, arrivals, and the north side. The left part of the airport comprises security, passport control, a cafe and a check-in counter. The right part consists of passport control and customs. In terms of the north side, there is a walkway connected with eight gates. After development, the pier will undergo a remarkable change in design terms, bearing a Y-shaped architecture, resulting in its area being expanded significantly. The number of boarding gates will increase accordingly, from 8 to 18 gates. They will remove the walkway and replace it with a sky train. When it comes to the left side, the cafe will be relocated to the left corner of the entrance and the check-in zone will be turned into a bag drop zone next to the previous café. There will be an expansion in the area of the arrival hall, with a car hire zone being established on this new ground. On the same side of the car hire zone, a cafe and an ATM zone will be added. There will be two departures and two arrivals gates doors in the airport. Security, passport control, and customs will be unchanged
The maps exhibit Southwest
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Airport
in the present time and proposed
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changes
next
year after advancement.

Overall
, The principal
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change
will be on the north side and entrance. There will be drastic
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changes
in the
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airport
such as new
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gates
,
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cafe
, ATM and car hire and
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some
new facilities will
also
offer for both departing and arriving passengers.

As it is
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seen
that, the Southwest
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Airport
is
currently
divided into three segments: departures, arrivals, and the north side. The
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left
part of the
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airport
comprises security, passport control, a
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cafe
and a
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check
-in counter. The right part consists of passport control and customs. In terms of the north side, there is a walkway connected with eight gates.

After development, the pier will undergo a remarkable
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change
in design terms, bearing a Y-shaped architecture, resulting in its area
being expanded
significantly
. The number of boarding
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gates
will increase
accordingly
, from 8 to 18
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gates
. They will remove the walkway and replace it with a sky train. When it
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comes
to the
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left
side, the
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cafe
will
be relocated
to the
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left
corner of the entrance and the
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check
-in
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zone
will
be turned
into a bag drop
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zone
next
to the previous café. There will be an expansion in the area of the arrival hall, with a car hire
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zone
being established
on this new ground. On the same side of the car hire
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zone
, a
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cafe
and an ATM
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zone
will be
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added
. There will be two departures and two arrivals
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gates
doors in the
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airport
. Security, passport control, and customs will
be unchanged
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IELTS academic The maps exhibit Southwest Airport in the present time and proposed changes next year after advancement.

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