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the graph show the number of visitors in British museums

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The given line graph depicts how many travelers visited three museums in England from June to September 2003. Overall, British museums visitors were by far the most common museums which attract the largest visitors through the period surveyed. Meanwhile, the figures for the Natural History Museum reached their nadir and then recovered. Science Museums figures also decrease moderately before leveling off at the middle of the period subsequently gradual recovery onwards. As can be seen, the number of sightseers at the British museum stood at the highest in June with 6 thousand, and then it reached a peak at about 7. 5 thousand in the middle of July. Afterward, there was a sharp fall to exactly 5 thousand in August, followed by a significant rise to approximately 6. 5 thousand at the end of the period. In contrast, the figure for the History museums started at 4 thousand before decreasing modestly to hit a low point by 3 thousand in August which accounted for the fewest sightseers. After that, this figure experienced a dramatic growth to nearly 4. 5 thousand in September. However, as regards the Science museum, it was the second most popular museum throughout the period with around 6. 5 thousand in June, after it dropped steadily to 3. 5 thousand in July, this figure remained stable at 3. 5 thousand during the period between June and August which at this point this figure witnessed a constant increase to just over 4. 5 thousand in September.

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