Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The maps show the panchavillage 2005-2015

The maps show the panchavillage 2005-2015 jbyNd
the maps below show a panchavillage in 2005 and the same s panchavillage in 2015. the maps details change to the village of pancha from 2005-2015. I commence with, by 2005, single dirt present in 2015 had been transformed into a highway lined with road signs, where telephone lines are hung up and telecommunition towers in the bottom left corner of the map. In cornor primary school and side to market abviable. In market 5 building. in left corner of pogodas in which 2 addtional building. The panchavillage developed in 2015. In many change and built additional places. there are various changes in 2015 like built two education school, built double road and added on international highway. It was become better communication and constructed five building. In aviable market. Panchavillage built like a town. Conclusion: - Looking from an overall perspective. The panchavillage 2005 become better in 2015.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
maps below
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
a
Possible spelling mistake found.
panchavillage
in 2005 and the same s
Possible spelling mistake found.
panchavillage
in 2015.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
maps
You should probably use "detail".
details
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
to the village of
Possible spelling mistake found.
pancha
from 2005-2015. I commence with, by 2005, single dirt present in 2015 had
been transformed
into a highway lined with road signs, where telephone lines
are hung
up and
Possible spelling mistake found.
telecommunition
towers in the bottom
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
corner of the map. In
Possible spelling mistake found.
cornor
primary school and side to market
Possible spelling mistake found.
abviable
. In market 5 building.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
corner of
Possible spelling mistake found.
pogodas
in which 2
Possible spelling mistake found.
addtional
building. The
Possible spelling mistake found.
panchavillage
developed in 2015. In
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
and built additional places.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
there
are various
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in 2015 like built two education school, built double road and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
on international highway. It
was become
better communication and constructed five building. In
Possible spelling mistake found.
aviable
market.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Panchavillage
built like a town. Conclusion:
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
Looking from an
overall
perspective. The
Possible spelling mistake found.
panchavillage
2005 become better in 2015.

IELTS academic The maps show the panchavillage 2005-2015

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The maps show the panchavillage 2005-2015