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The pie graph below shows the percentage of people who watched films on different types in 1992 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graph below shows the percentage of people who watched films on different types in 1992 and 2008. qREdw
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of films watched in different formats in 1992 and 2008. Overall, after almost two decades, TV and video became much less popular while the percentage of people watching films on the Internet and Cinema increased significantly. The percentage of films watched on Television decreased sharply by approximately a haft from nearly 50% to 30% after 18 years starting from 1992. Similarly, there was a significant decrease in the proportion of people using video to watch films from nearly a third in 1992 to about 2 percent in 2008. In contrast, the Internet became much more popular with over a third of the using rate in 2008. Besides, the percentage of people who watched films in cinema increased dramatically from around 10% to about 15%, in 1992 and 2008 respectively. In addition, In 1992 over 15% of films were seen by DVD then this figure rose slightly to about 24% in 2008.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of films
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different
formats in 1992 and 2008.
Overall
, after almost two decades, TV and video became much less popular while the percentage of
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people
watching films on the Internet and Cinema increased
significantly
.

The percentage of films
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watched
on Television decreased
sharply
by approximately a haft from
nearly
50% to 30% after 18 years starting from 1992.
Similarly
, there was a significant decrease in the proportion of
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people
using video to
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watch
films from
nearly
a third in 1992 to about 2 percent in 2008.

In contrast
, the Internet became much more popular with over a third of the using rate in 2008.
Besides
, the percentage of
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people
who
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watched
films in cinema increased
dramatically
from around 10% to about 15%, in 1992 and 2008
respectively
.
In addition
, In 1992 over 15% of films were
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seen
by DVD then this figure rose
slightly
to about 24% in 2008.

IELTS academic The pie graph below shows the percentage of people who watched films on different types in 1992 and 2008.

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