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The graph reveals the difference grades among the students of foreign and local in significant university in UK in 2009.The vertical axis shows the percentage of the students while the horizontal one illustrates subjects. It is clear that in general degrees of indigenous students are better than international ones, especially in social-related subjects as the others are good at specific-related subjects.

The graph reveals the difference grades among the students of foreign and local in significant university in UK in 2009. The vertical axis shows the percentage of the students while the horizontal one illustrates subjects. It is clear that in general degrees of indigenous students are better than international ones, especially in social-related subjects as the others are good at specific-related subjects. 2RbpX
at specific-related subjects. Similar amount of students' grades are the same quantity as in nursing acquiring just under four-fifths and also in accountancy attaining three-fifths. The best results are shown by international students in information technology points over 80 percentage. On the one hand, in sociology Uk students take the best grades are four-fifths. The lowest point is mentioned with half percent local students while the results of international students in this points are roughly 60 percent. To sum up, national students are better such kind of subjects which are social and natural sciences while the best results of international students are in technology-related subjects.
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IELTS academic The graph reveals the difference grades among the students of foreign and local in significant university in UK in 2009. The vertical axis shows the percentage of the students while the horizontal one illustrates subjects. It is clear that in general degrees of indigenous students are better than international ones, especially in social-related subjects as the others are good at specific-related subjects.

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