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The graph provides information on spending per item and world population by continents.

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The graph provides information on spending per item and world population by continents. Overall, the most notable feature is the proportion of the population of Asia and the percentage of people spending on activities other transport, clothing, food, housing accounts for the most. As can be seen from the world spending chart that the lowest spending on Clothing is only 6%, contrary to that, the proportion of spending on food, housing, transportation, and other spending are 24%, 12%, 18% and 40% respectively. In the world population graph, Asia has the largest percentage of the population at exactly 57%, just ahead of the figure for the population of Africa at only 10%. Besides, the populations of America and Europe are equal and at 14%. In this chart, it is evident that the population of other continents is quite low at just only 5% total.
The graph provides information on
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per item and world
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by continents.

Overall
, the most notable feature is the proportion of the
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population
of Asia and the percentage of
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people
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spending
on activities other transport, clothing, food, housing accounts for the most.

As can be
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seen
from the world
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chart that the lowest
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on Clothing is
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only
6%, contrary to that, the proportion of
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spending
on food, housing, transportation, and other
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spending
are 24%, 12%, 18% and 40%
respectively
.

In the world
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population
graph, Asia has the largest percentage of the
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population
at exactly 57%,
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just
ahead of the figure for the
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of Africa at
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only
10%.
Besides
, the
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of America and Europe are equal and at 14%. In this chart, it is evident that the
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of other continents is quite low at
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just
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only
5% total.
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