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The chart displays the value of exports in different categories during 2015 and 2016 for one country and table shows the percentage change for each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Overall, petroleum and engineered goods were accounted for major exports. The exports of gems and jewellery decreased in 2016 compared to 2015, whereas the exports of all remaining categories were increased. The export of Petroleum products were just above $60 billions in 2015 and it rose 3 percent in year 2016. Similarly, the export of engineered goods were just below $60 billions and it increased 8. 5 percent in 2016. Exports in gems and jewellery, agricultural products and textiles were significantly lower than exports in petroleum products and engineered goods. The exports in jems and jewellery was just above $40 billions in year 2015 and then it decreased 5. 18 percent in 2016. Exports in agricultural products almost remained steady in years 2015 and 2016. The exports in textiles experienced hugh rise of 15. 24 percent from year 2015 to 2016.
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of all remaining categories
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above $60 billions in 2015 and it rose 3
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2016.
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of engineered
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below $60 billions and it increased 8. 5
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2015 and then it decreased 5. 18
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