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The maps show the layout of a university’s science park in 2008 and at present.

The maps show the layout of a university’s science park in 2008 and at present. PR7jg
The given maps describe several developments which were made to a university’s science park between 2008 and the present time. Overall, it is evident that the park experienced a number of alterations in terms of facilities. Meanwhile, the woodland, the offices, and the business units remain untouched. At the moment, there is research and development in the Northwestern part of the park, which occupies the original site of the grassland. Next to it, the reception was replaced by the university hub and the offices are in the same place. Moreover, the car park and the business units are in the right position but the space of the car park has become significantly smaller and a cycle path was also built with every road except the curve road in the east. The Southern part of the park witnessed the addition of a new train station with walkways connected with various facilities, and the IT center was converted into an innovation center. Ultimately, cyber security was enlarged and the shape is now like L.
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describe
several developments which
were made
to a university’s science
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park
between 2008 and the present time.

Overall
, it is evident that the
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park
experienced a number of alterations in terms of facilities. Meanwhile, the woodland, the offices, and the business units remain untouched.

At the moment, there is research and development in the Northwestern part of the
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park
, which occupies the original site of the grassland.
Next
to it, the reception
was replaced
by the university hub and the offices are in the same place.
Moreover
, the car
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park
and the business units are in the right position
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but
the space of the car
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park
has become
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significantly smaller
and a cycle path was
also
built with every road except the curve road in the east.

The Southern part of the
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park
witnessed the addition of a new train station with walkways connected with various facilities, and the IT center
was converted
into an innovation center.
Ultimately
, cyber security
was enlarged
and the shape is
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now
like L.
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IELTS academic The maps show the layout of a university’s science park in 2008 and at present.

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