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The diagrams illustrate the differences of the village park over a period of a decade.

The diagrams illustrate the differences of the village park over a period of a decade. 73A2k
The diagrams illustrate the differences of the village park over a period of a decade. Overall the park witnessed dramatic changes after 10 years with 6 new features can be seen in the second diagram. It is clear that, 10 years ago, the park was quite simple and had few amenities. Firstly, the entrance at the north-west conner remained in place for 10 years. As we can see, now the football pitch located in the centre of the park is smaller than it was 10 years ago. At the top of the football pitch is a tennis court which has been doubled in sized and at the bottom left of the tennis court is the car park which has also been expended after a decade. Looking at the maps in more detail, in 10 years time, a cycle path has been made all around the park. At the north-east conner, the children play area’s locate has not been changed but has been divided in half and added the children soft play zone. The toilet has been built below a children play ground. Looking at the bottom right conner of the map, now the pond is replaced by a small boating lake and the woods forest next to it also became a cafe. Finally, the picnic ares has been constructed over a decade.
The diagrams illustrate the differences of the village
park
over a period of a decade.
Overall
the
park
witnessed dramatic
changes
after 10 years with 6 new features can be
seen
in the second diagram.

It is
clear
that, 10 years ago, the
park
was quite simple and had few amenities.
Firstly
, the entrance at the north-west
conner
remained in place for 10 years. As we can
see
,
now
the football pitch located in the
centre
of the
park
is smaller than it was 10 years ago. At the top of the football pitch is a tennis court which has
been doubled
in sized and at the bottom
left
of the tennis court is the car
park
which has
also
been expended
after a decade.

Looking at the maps in more detail, in 10 years time, a cycle path has
been made
all around the
park
. At the north-east
conner
, the children play
area’s
locate has not been
changed
but
has
been divided
in half and
added
the children soft play zone. The toilet has
been built
below a children play ground. Looking at the bottom right
conner
of the map,
now
the pond
is replaced
by a
small
boating lake and the woods forest
next
to it
also
became a
cafe
.
Finally
, the picnic ares has
been constructed
over a decade.
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