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The graph provides information about measurements of the wheat that are exported from three distinct regions over the five years.

The graph provides information about measurements of the wheat that are exported from three distinct regions over the five years. As can be seen the data, the wheat exports from Canada, Australia and, European Community in millions of tonnes from 1985 to1990. Overall, although Canada exported slightly more wheat than the others, there wasn’t a steady rose in these period of time. It started to export wheat almost 20 millions of tones in 1985 then it fell slightly next year but wheat export rose dramatically for two years. In comparison with Australia pattern, it was reversed between 1985 to 1988. Wheat exports of European Community fluctuated gradually over these five years. At first there was a gradual decline in quantity of export wheat but it rose slightly to 20 millions of tonnes. In general, export of wheat in Australia, Canada and, European Community had meaningful differences between 1985 to 1990.

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wheat
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exports
 from Canada, Australia and, European Community in millions of tonnes from 1985 to1990.

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next
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wheat
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 rose dramatically
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1988.

Wheat
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exports
 of European Community fluctuated gradually
 over these five years. At first
 there was a gradual decline in quantity of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
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wheat
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but
 it rose slightly
 to Use a singular form of the numeral here: “20 million”.20 million
20 millions of
 tonnes.

In general
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export
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
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between 1985 to 1990
. 