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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar chart illustrates the production and consumption of electricity in the top ten countries in 2014 From the chart, it is clearly seen that all of the countries except Germany, produce more than they consume. The leading countries of the top are China, where 5, 398 and 5, 322 billion kWh were produced and consumed respectively, and the USA, where 4, 099 billion kWh were produced and 3, 866 billion kWh were consumed by the population. Russia leads the rest of the countries, producing 1058 and consuming 1037 billion kWh of electricity, followed by Japan, that makes 936. 2 billion and consumes 856. 7 billion kWh of electricity. The 5th and 6th places of the top are occupied by India and Canada, with India producing and consuming 871 billion kWh and 698. 8 billion respectively. Canada has slightly lower numbers in both, with 618. 9 billion consumed and 499. 9 billion produced. The other countries followed the same pattern of decrease. The only exception was Germany, that consumed more than in produced, with 526. 6 and 582. 5 billion kWh in consumption and production
The following bar chart illustrates the production and consumption of electricity in the top ten
countries
in 2014

From the chart, it is
clearly
seen
that
all of the
countries
except Germany, produce more than they consume.

The leading
countries
of the top are China, where 5, 398 and 5, 322
billion
kWh were
produced
and
consumed
respectively
, and the USA, where 4, 099
billion
kWh were
produced
and 3, 866
billion
kWh were
consumed
by the population. Russia leads the rest of the
countries
, producing 1058 and consuming 1037
billion
kWh of electricity, followed by Japan, that
makes
936. 2
billion
and consumes 856. 7
billion
kWh of electricity. The 5th and 6th places of the top
are occupied
by India and Canada, with India producing and consuming 871
billion
kWh and 698. 8
billion
respectively
. Canada has
slightly
lower numbers in both, with 618. 9
billion
consumed
and 499. 9
billion
produced
. The other
countries
followed the same pattern of decrease. The
only
exception was Germany, that
consumed
more than in
produced
, with 526. 6 and 582. 5
billion
kWh in consumption and production
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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