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Analysis the pie chart and the table given below.

Analysis the pie chart and the table given below. GLVVj

The pie chart illustrates the further activities did by anthropology degree holders after graduation whereas, the table gives information about the salaries of the anthropologist who are in job for five years. The details are represented in percentage. Overall, half the graduates were, , having full time employment moreover, those who were employed in government sector has the highest salary range after five years of work. Least opted for the part time job as well as postgraduate studies together. Even after five years of experience in private employment they were payed very low compared to other sectors. Firstly, 52% were working full time secondly

The pie chart illustrates the further
 activities did Did you maybe mean "buy" or "be"?buybe
by
 anthropology degree holders after graduation whereas, the table gives information about the salaries of the anthropologist who are in job for five years. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
are represented
 in percentage.

Overall
, half the graduates were,Two consecutive commas,
 ,
 having full time employment moreover
, those who were employed
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 sector has the highest salary range after five years of work. Least opted for the This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 job as well
 as postgraduate studies together. “Even after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even after
 five years of experience in private employment they were Only in a nautical context 'payed' is an acceptable past tense form of 'pay'. Please check!paid
payed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 low compared to other sectors.

Firstly
, 52% were working full time secondly