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The Graph illustrates University graduates of Canada of Males and Females during 1992-2007.

The Graph illustrates University graduates of Canada of Males and Females during 1992-2007. 1aD0W
Passage 1: In the graph it shows females from the university in the year 1992 were 100, 000 students and it rose to 105, 000 to the year 1995. From the year 1996 to 1999 there was a falldown of the students in the university. But later from the year 2000 there has been a huge raise in the students from 105000 to 146000 upto the year 2007. Passage 2: When coming to the Male graduate students in the universtiy, it started in the year 1992 with a number of 70000 and rose constantly upto the year 1995 with 75, 000 students. From the year 1996, there are some fluctuations in the student numbers till the year 2001. There is a constant rise in the students from the year 2002 to 2007. Overview: When compared the University graduates of canada during the years 1992-2007, the male students rose to the number only 25000 but female students increased upto 46, 000. Femlae students occupy more in number than male.
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1992 were 100, 000
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and it rose to 105, 000 to the
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1995. From the
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1996 to 1999 there was a
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2000 there has been a huge raise in the
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from 105000 to 146000
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2007.

Passage 2: When coming to the Male graduate
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in the
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, it
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1992 with a
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of 70000 and rose
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1995 with 75, 000
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. From the
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1996, there are
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fluctuations in the
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till the
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2001. There is a constant rise in the
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2002 to 2007.

Overview: When compared the University graduates of
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during the years 1992-2007, the male
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25000
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female
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increased
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than male.

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