Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Air pollution levels by different causes

Air pollution levels by different causes 6NDPl

This bar graphs depicts that ranges of air pollutant causes divided into four distinctive countries in the year 2021. Overall, it can be observed that The level of air pollutants is separated into three segments electricity generation, industry and transport. Interestingly in China Number of causes are higher as compared To America in Japan. Whereas in Australia it is visible equivalent in all three cases. It is noticeable, In China industry Creates a lot of air pollutants Around 80% but transport and electricity less than 70%. In addition, Electricity generation around 15%. However, in America generation of electricity twice. In America transport ratio around 60% approximately. But in Japan it is totally half around 30%. Industry is inversely proportional to each other in both America in Japan. Furthermore, in Australia all three forms of Causes our constant (i. e. , 19%). In conclusion, this figure stated that China hast the most polluted country in comparison to all other countries. The ratio of china slightly high. Australia has the least number of pollutants.

This bar graphs depicts that ranges of air You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoxic wastetoxinpoisonpollution
pollutant
 causes divided into four distinctive countries in the year 2021.

Overall
, it can be observed
 that The level of air You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoxic wastetoxinpoisonpollution
pollutants
is separated
 into three segments You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
 generation, industry and transport. Interestingly
 in China Number of causes are higher Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 compared To America in Japan. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
 in Australia it is visible equivalent in all three cases.

It is noticeable, In China industry Creates This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 air You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoxic wastetoxinpoisonpollution
pollutants
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
Around
 80% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 transport and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
 less than 70%. In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
Electricity
 generation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 15%. However
, in America generation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
 twice. In America transport ratio You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 60% approximately. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in Japan it is totally
 half You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 30%. Industry is inversely
 proportional to each other in both America in Japan. Furthermore
, in Australia all three forms of Causes our constant (There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma,
 ,
 19%).

In conclusion
, this figure stated that China hast the most polluted country in comparison
 to all other countries. The ratio of china slightly
 high. Australia has the least number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoxic wastetoxinpoisonpollution
pollutants
. 