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The number of XYZ radio station listeners since 1940 with projections until 2030.

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The number of XYZ radio station listeners since 1940 with projections until 2030. The line graph gives information about the quantity of XYZ radio station audience for 90 years during the period from 1940 to 2030. Overview. From the first glance according to totals, it is evident that it rises and falls erratically in listening XYZ radio station during 90 years between 1940 and 2030. In 1940 it was at approximately 20. It skyrocketed rapidly during 10 years throughout the period from 1940 until 1950 and reached at about 55 in 1950. During the next 5 years, between 1950 and 1955 it rocketed sharply and reached a high point - at 105. For 5 years during the period from 1955 till 1960, there was a very dramatic slump and it reached at raughly 20 in 1960. Over the next 5 years, between 1960 and 1965, it surged by 45 and during the next 10 years from 1965 to 1975, there was a rapid plateau at 45. It plummeted unexpectly to 15 by 1980 but later doubled to around 30 by 1985. Over the next 30 year, during the period from 1985 to 2015, there were many noticeable fluctuations. After that it sourced sharply to 40 by 2020 then continued its upward trend more enormously to80 by 2030. There was a rapid levelling of at 80 in 2030.
The number of XYZ radio station listeners since 1940 with projections until 2030.

The line graph gives information about the quantity of XYZ radio station audience for 90 years during the
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from 1940 to 2030.

Overview. From the
first
glance according to totals, it is evident that it rises and falls
erratically
in listening XYZ radio station during 90 years between 1940 and 2030.

In
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1940 it
was at approximately 20. It skyrocketed
rapidly
during 10 years throughout the
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period
from 1940 until 1950 and reached at about 55 in 1950.

During the
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5 years, between 1950 and 1955 it rocketed
sharply
and reached

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a
high point
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at 105. For 5 years during the
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dramatic slump and it reached at
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20 in 1960. Over the
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5 years, between 1960 and 1965, it surged by 45 and during the
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10 years from 1965 to 1975, there was a rapid plateau at 45. It plummeted
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to 15 by 1980
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later doubled to around 30 by 1985. Over the
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30
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, during the
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from 1985 to 2015, there were
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noticeable fluctuations.
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that it sourced
sharply
to 40 by 2020 then continued its upward trend more
enormously
to80 by 2030. There was a rapid levelling of at 80 in 2030.
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