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The graph shows the audiences to radio and television in 1992.

The graph shows the audiences to radio and television in 1992. mWYmq

The line graph depicts the rate of listeners and viewers that tuned to radio and television stations throughout the day in London from October to December in 1992. The people are over four years old. Overall, people who tuned to radio stations were more during the day whereas individuals that watched television networks are higher at night, although both stations experienced a low proportion of audiences at midnight. To begin, individuals that logged on to radio stations accounted for about 2% at 1. 00 am on the contrary remained plateaued till approximately 6 am where it increased drastically to about a quarter of the audience. Listeners that logged on to the stations decreased substantially to about 10% by 15. 00hours. It had experienced several fluctuations before reaching approximately 4% by 23. 00hours. On the contrary, the audience to television networks accounted for about 6% at 1. 00 am. The shift in the movement rose to about 12% by 13. 00 hours and took a peek at approximately 42% by 21. 00 hours but later fell rapidly to about 10% by 23. 30 hours.

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stations
 experienced a low proportion of audiences at midnight.

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, individuals that logged on to radio You use this word too often, consider replacing it withterminalhousedepotsitelocation
stations
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