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Queen Mary Hospital and its surroundings

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The maps illustrate the changes at Queen Mary Hospital and its surroundings in 1960, 1980, and 2000. Overall, it's clear that the size of the hospital area had been increased steadily from 1960 to 2000. Also, some buildings had been demolished during this period. Besides, there were changes in the size of some buildings. In 1960, there were 4 different buildings. They were the hospital, the shopping centre, the farmland, and the car park. The hospital was next to shopping centre and also it was in front of the car park. Moreover, there was the farmland was behind the shopping centre. In 1980, the shopping centre and the farmland were demolished in order to build the nursing school, the cancer centre, and the pharmacy. Furthermore, the hospital was extended while the car park stayed the same size. In 2000, the cancer centre had the most significant extending. Also, the nursing school and the car park were decreased in size. Moreover, the pharmacy and the main building of the hospital had no change during two decades
The maps illustrate the
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at Queen Mary
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Hospital
and its surroundings in 1960, 1980, and 2000.

Overall
, it's
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clear
that the size of the
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hospital
area had
been increased
steadily
from 1960 to 2000.
Also
,
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some
buildings had
been demolished
during this period.
Besides
, there were
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changes
in the size of
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buildings.

In 1960, there were 4
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different
buildings. They were the
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hospital
, the
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shopping
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centre
, the farmland, and the
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car
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park
. The
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hospital
was
next
to
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shopping
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centre
and
also
it was in front of the
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car
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park
.
Moreover
, there was the farmland was behind the
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shopping
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centre
.

In 1980, the
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shopping
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centre
and the farmland
were demolished
in order to build the nursing school, the cancer
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centre
, and the pharmacy.
Furthermore
, the
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hospital
was extended
while the
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car
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park
stayed the same size.

In 2000, the cancer
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centre
had the most significant extending.
Also
, the nursing school and the
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car
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park
were decreased
in size.
Moreover
, the pharmacy and the main building of the
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hospital
had no
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change
during two decades
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IELTS academic Queen Mary Hospital and its surroundings

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