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hydroelectric power station

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In the present-day hydroelectric power station provide electricity to whole cities villages. Hydroelectricity is one of the main electricity production source of humanity, more than 50% of humanity electricity is comes from hydro electric power stations such as shown in the diagram. the process of production of hydroelectricity starts by building a Dam on the river creating a high-level reservoir which has a opening beneath leading to a high pressure pipeline due to the huge weight of the water, water travels at high pressure to the turbine in the power station causing the turbine to oscillate and generate electricity which is transferred to national grid by power lines. There is a second reservoir at the end of the station known as low level reservoir. This reservoir plays a very specific role of holding the water used by the station during sunlight and pumping it back during night all the way to the high-level reservoir. Hydro electricity is one of the least polluting ways of producing electricity but instead of polluting hydro electricity casues harm to the local flora and fauna. This is how probably you and your family enjoy the 21st century.
In the present-day hydroelectric
power
station
provide
electricity
to whole cities villages. Hydroelectricity is one of the main
electricity
production source of humanity, more than 50% of humanity
electricity
is
comes
from
hydro electric
power
stations
such as shown in the diagram.

the
process of production of hydroelectricity
starts
by building a Dam on the river creating a high-level
reservoir
which has
a
opening beneath leading to a high pressure pipeline due to the huge weight of the water, water travels at high pressure to the turbine in the
power
station
causing the turbine to oscillate and generate
electricity
which
is transferred
to national grid by
power
lines.

There is a second
reservoir
at the
end
of the
station
known as low level
reservoir
. This
reservoir
plays a
very
specific role of holding the water
used
by the
station
during sunlight and pumping it back during night all the way to the high-level reservoir.

Hydro
electricity
is one of the least polluting ways of producing
electricity
but
instead
of polluting hydro
electricity
casues
harm to the local flora and fauna.

This is how
probably
you and your family enjoy the 21st century.
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