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The graph illustrates the number of passengers who have activity on the Toronto Metro system for July 2007 from Monday to Friday. There are two criterias: the number of people and the time of day.

The graph illustrates the number of passengers who have activity on the Toronto Metro system for July 2007 from Monday to Friday. There are two criterias: the number of people and the time of day. The line always changes its directions countinuely, which is not stable. From 6 o’clock in the morning to 10 o’clock in the evening that everytime the passengers are all above 100 thousand passergers. The graph is grown up rapidly from 6 o’clock to 8 o’clock in the morning at that point has the largest number is about 400 thousand people. Similarly, at about 6 pm, the graph is sharply again with the number is almost close to 400 thousand people. In constract, passenger activity on the Toronto Metro system is lower at 10 am to 4 pm and 8 pm to 10 pm than others. The line goes down at 4pm and also return increases slightly in late night.

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number
 of passengers who have activity on the Toronto Metro system for July 2007 from Monday to Friday. There are two Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "criteria", the plural form of the noun 'criteria'?criteria
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: the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and the time of day.

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changes
 its directions Possible spelling mistake found.continuedcontinuecontinuescontinuallycontinuitycontinual
countinuely
, which is not stable. From 6 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
o’clock
 in the morning to 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
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 in the evening that Possible spelling mistake found.every time
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 the passengers are all above 100 thousand Possible spelling mistake found.passengers
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. The graph is grown
 up rapidly
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o’clock
 to 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
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 in the morning at that point has the largest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 is about 400 thousand This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Similarly
, at about 6 pm, the graph is sharply
 again with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 is almost close to 400 thousand This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

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, passenger activity on the Toronto Metro system is lower at 10 am to 4 pm and 8 pm to 10 pm than others. The line goes down at 4pm and also
 return increases slightly
 in late night. 